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Wednesday, October 13, 2010

Piece 2

35 comments:

  1. This is Kyle Beadling. The smell of grief and isolation filled the air as the woman looked back at the home she had just lost.

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  2. Regret and sorrow cling to her with desire, as her only home travels further in the distance.

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  3. As remorse fills the air leaving an everlasting aroma, she realized she can never go back.

    Dan Brennan

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  4. A lack of confidence shows as she choose what path to take to the road of redemption.

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  5. Fear is seperating the woman from going back and seeing her past.
    Nicole Chabak

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  6. The helpless girl crawls for life to the abaodoned house on the hill. (Paul)

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  7. Her fragile body beings to crawl, as the sweet home finally comes to light.

    Paola Penko

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  8. A lost little girl finding her way back home, comes across an abandoned feeling house.

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  9. mariana Diosa....

    Leaving home is easy, regretting what is done is hard, but going back seem further than never.

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  10. The helpless lady scrambles back to her house after a horrific car accident ]. -Andy Nguyen

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  11. the heartbroken woman lays in the grass. the cold, dark house stares back with no remorse.

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  12. As she felt the dead grass, she thought, all good things must come to an end.

    Jackie Quaranta

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  13. The starving woman cries out for help to the dull house. Paul Anzalone

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  14. Cold winds whipped her hair into her tearing eyes, unwanting to return to her broken life.

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  15. She grips the dead dry grass thinking that this act of desperation will somehow bring back her lost loved ones.

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  16. Drained by weakness attempting to crawl back to her distant home through the soaring meadow.
    -Jalisa Washington

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  17. Thought were racing in light year speeds and remorse dwells within that restrains her from return. -RJ Aguilar

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  18. Thoughts raced through her head in light year speeds and remorse dwells within that restrains her from return.
    -RJ Aguilar

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  19. THIS IS SYMONE.....SCREAMS AWAKENED THE LITE SLEEPER ENJOYING HER NAP UNDER THE SUN...IN THE MIST OF THE COOL LITE BREEZE.

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  20. I feel like the girl is homesick and tries crawling her way back, but fails.-Billy Powell

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  21. Dean: The lady sits in sorrows, breathless and humble as she watches them raid her house.

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  22. Cries are evoked from the rolling plains giving the house a shaking blow of panic as if the girls broken leg was a battle cry of admitting death.

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  23. As the woman cries desperately for help, she comes to find herself left only with her thoughts and pain. -Rich Reid

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  24. Desperation consumed the young lady as she tried to crawl home with two broken legs.

    -Mike Pizzolato

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  25. Kristen Coffey
    Regret fills her up as she looks upon the home she once knew.

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  26. Virgilio- Rosen

    She looked back as the house swayed side to side and the illusion of the house almost made her want to get up and walk.

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  27. The lonely abandoned girl looks at the homes longing for a home to belong to. -Jen brown

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  28. She laid there quietly ,in her field of possibilities, turning back one last time to view the life she would leave behind on her journey to find better.

    - Cassandra Bernardini

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  29. Lost in her own world the woman find she can start a new beginning - Joe Dimino

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  30. Looking back fearful, she knew this was for the better after all he's done.

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  31. This homesick woman, in an act of desperation, is crawling back to her memories of home

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  32. As she tries to pull back to her memories of home, they get further away.

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  33. She has lost the part of her that feels like home, she spends her youth dreaming of something that is just out of reach

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  34. Her desire increases as her confidence dwindles, as she longs for reaching the farmhouse she always could turn to in times of depression, in a grey world.
    -shane roback

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