MODULE: Peer Edit #1: Pick someone who is not a member of your family. Peer edit by simply reading aloud informal essay #1. Note anything that "sounds" awkward or incorrect. You may note edits from your own paper. You may interupt your partner to note issues with his/her paper.
WRITE: Rewrite and resubmit informal essay 1. Please hand in with original attached, or you will not receive credit.
THINK:
1. About Costal's Ceys to writing as you edit. If you focus on not making these mistakes alone...you will see vast improvement in your writing.
2. What does the picture attached to this post have to do with the post itself. Submit your answer as a comment to the post. The first correct (or creative answer) will receive extra credit.
This is Mark Son, of the Misty Beets and I have a feeling that those are 3 docks of different wood and size. These docks possibly symbolize the way a paper starts.It is the smallest and most raggedy dock at first but with improvement or editing, a paper can get stronger and more effective and efficient just like the docks start to get nicer and bigger as time goes by adding hard work.
ReplyDeleteI hope nobody steals my answer because I think I was correct in my assumption.
ReplyDeletei agree with Mark
ReplyDeleteMark said it all.
ReplyDeleteWell this is mia. Im in the Rhetoric Rex family. i believe this is a picture of posts. posts itself means -a strong piece of timber, metal, or the like, set upright as a support, a point of attachment, a place for displaying notices, etc.So its excatly what you said. its a post with in a post.
ReplyDeleteI think the picture attached has to do with the post its self because it is same but in a different size like the docks, they look kind of the same but they are different sizes
ReplyDeletebut i do agree with mark
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion the first bridge has a upward slop that state that to work hard and if you do not study or work hard you will falling down as bridge doing down at the end.
ReplyDeleteThe second state the constant progress.
The third bridge state that as bridge increasing at the beginning and keep increase we have to do that to achieve our goal
Nirmit- I think 3 boat symbolizes about college. First Boat like Ankit said it represents how life of college is if you do well you stay up there, if you do bad you fall down.
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